Modern Edits of 1 Cor 14:24-25

I was reading 1 Corinthians 14 and realized most Christians of today would probably want to EDIT 1 Cor 14:24-25.  Many of us might edit this passage of scripture to read something more like this:

24 But if an unbeliever or someone who does not understand comes in while everybody is prophesying the qualified pastor is prophesying, he will be convinced by all convinced by the eloquence of a sermon that he is a sinner and will be judged by all judged by the pastor’s polite altar call. 25 and the secrets of his heart will be laid bare, so he will fall down and worship God, exclaiming, “God is really among you” “God really speaks through your pastor.”

What do you think?